randomtaco624's veteran app

maybe its timezone, but i have never seen you.?

Helthmagazine wrote:maybe its timezone, but i have never seen you.?

^ This I have never seen you online.

He plays pretty actively, I see him on every few days usually. 

And I suggest beefing this up. This looks like you spent 3 minutes on. We don't give out Veteran rank like candy.

randomtaco624 wrote:Minecraft username: randomtaco624

Real name (recommended): Fakename McNotarealname

Age: 16

Location: VA, USA

How long have you been playing on THIS server?: about 7 months

How often do you plan on being on THIS server?: now that schools out, a lot more often.

Have you voted for Oasis at www.bit.ly/oasisv ?: yes

Name any JrMods, Mods or Admins who would vouch for you (This means you actually have to ask them): ZapokeTheBoss, TwixxTwizz(if she ever comes back on)

Why do you deserve Veteran status? What sets you apart from the other Trusted players?: i have been trusted for a long time, and its true i havent been on much recently due to finals but school is out now and i plan to be on more often. i dont know what kind of permissions come with the rank, but i love oasis and i will continue to contribute as much as i can. 

Couple things wrong with this. 

A)You haven't been here for seven months, you've been here for four. Forum date=Join date, my friend.

B)Zapoke and Twixx are not staff, and Twixx has been offline for ages. I've also just noticed Zapoke today. Not exactly the best vouches.

C)You said it yourself, you don't even know what veteran is about. I'm going to ignore the fact that you don't give any reasoning for why you should be veteran and skip to the chase: You incorrectly assume that the only way to help other people is if you have [Veteran] in front of your name. You don't, so there's no point in giving you a rank that you only want because you want /i (Which is, btw, one of the perms that come with the rank). 

With another 8 months, four good paragraphs, and one or two ACTUAL staff vouches, maybe I'll vouch for you. Until then, in the words of Davidmich, 'Ha'.