Timlebrun21's re veteran application

Minecraft username:[MrOinkers]timlebrun21.
 
Real name (recommended):Tim.
 
Age:15.
 
Location: United States of America.
 
How long have you been playing on THIS server?:I have been playing on this server for 6 months now.
 
How often do you plan on being on THIS server?:I plan to be playing on this server for as long as I can. I have been making many friends on the server now and when ever I jump on to play I always have something new to do. I will be playing on this server for a very long time.
 
Have you voted for Oasis at www.bit.ly/oasisv ?:Yes I have voted for this server.
 
Name any JrMods, Mods or Admins who would vouch for you (This means you actually have to ask them):No one answered.
 
Why do you deserve Veteran status? What sets you apart from the other Trusted players?: I think I am set apart from the other trusted is that I have been playing for a long time now and I know most of the ropes of the server. I have always been there for help like today I was asked to help someone with something and I want to go see what is up. I have been making warps for people that just haven't learned that ropes of there server yet can go and have a easy time at mc. I am always polite to people and I am always nice to everyone. When ever I see anyone on usually say hi (if I am not tired).I am just trying to say is that I think many things I do sets me apart from the other tursted players. This is why I think I would make a good veteran candidate.

VOUCH!!!  I have seen you helping out, giving advice, and to be honest, due to how you were acting and such, I had thought that you were already a Veteran. xD But anyway.... #Tim4VetOctober2013!!

Beef up your app a bit, and revise it, too many grammatical mistakes. I'm not saying that conventions should define your worthiness as Veteran, but it makes it hard to take the app seriously when you have several conventional mistakes. However, you are a very helpful, polite, and and fun to be around member of Oasis.

timlebrun21 wrote:When ever I see anyone on usually say (if I am not tired).I am just trying to say is that I think many things I do sets me apart from the other tursted players.

I re-read this, what? 10 times and still I can't make sense of it sorry? 

I won't judge you on your grammatical conventions towards a veteran candidate but seriously, what on earth are you trying to say?

Oh Jack I was going that "When ever I see anyone on usually I say hi

I think you deserve it <3

#Tim4VetOctober2013!!

4emersons wrote:VOUCH!!!  I have seen you helping out, giving advice, and to be honest, due to how you were acting and such, I had thought that you were already a Veteran. xD But anyway.... #Tim4VetOctober2013!!

<3

VOUCH from me, Tim seems very deserving of this status. Recognition for his help in the community is well earned, indeed.

Your a friendly player on oasis, and i truly think you deserve Veteran

Come on people #Tim4VetOctober2013 <-----

Vouch for sure

#Tim4vetOctoner2013
Come on people he deserves the rank

Oops typo
#Tim4VetOctober2013

ThunderTheW0lf wrote:Oops typo
#Tim4VetOctober2013

You do know about the Edit button right?  When you do a type or something that you want to fix, just edit it, rather than posting another reply.

You be trolling 4 be trolling

I am quite impressed on your form of writing, it seems quite advanced in form. The paragraphs are as if I was in my English Honors class... Beautiful. Also, luckily the words were simple and understood so it didn't give me an inferiority complex. xD lol 

Anyway, after complimenting your writing, I will now give my vouch.
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{Green Fluffy Mineturtles dancing on trains vouch!}
Limited Green edition! Good for 1.00001 vouch!  
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P.S. Ignored the grammar problems and corrected them in my head, but then again. I saw the grammar, but was more interested in how the topic sentence and supporting details wrapped around leading up to a conclusion. +-+ Some people go on forever +-+ this app sums it up in a short legible paragraph.