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Post by Andesconin on 4/18/2011, 11:09 pm

i had just joined the server last week and i built myself a nice little modern house. you can see it from the north exit of the spawn city. currently the main structure is nearing completion. i'll probably hole up that massive vertical hole in the ground out front, it was my mine where i got the resources for the house, but it just gets in the way, so i'll probably cover it up, i have an alternate entrance underground. and if the doors are all locked, there is a waterfall entrance at the bottom of the hill in the back, two vertical slits behind the water.

i'm planning on adding a second building next to it, but i was thinking of building a statue instead, something large that you can see when you walk out of the spawn city. i want to know what everyone thinks, sadly i do not have any pictures because of the temporary white list, but if anyone has the time and is curious, by all means, check it out, its small, but cozy. planning something larger for my next build :3...

-Andesconin


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Re: in search of critiquing

Post by Master_moles on 4/18/2011, 11:56 pm

I like your house, I'm thinking of making a modern home myself.

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Post by Ariley on 4/19/2011, 12:21 am

hi. you've been added to the whitelist.

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Post by Nova042 on 4/19/2011, 12:30 am

That is one fine looking place my friend. I really like how you fit three stories but still kept it looking small and cozy. The layout is unique and different. I have found that the difference between a lame house and a cool house is detail. You can make a house as big as you want, but it its square, made from one material and has nothing inside, it looks bad. But if you make a small, one bedroom home with a unique shape, opposing floor, ceiling and walls, bookcases, chairs etc., it makes a world of difference.

4/5 for design
3/5 construction materials
4/5 location
3/5 decoration

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Post by Andesconin on 4/19/2011, 2:16 am

i wasn't expecting replies so quickly, but thank you all, you guys just made my day, i'm gonna work on it a little more, though i think i'll have to buy bookshelves unless i can find some reeds.

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Post by Nova042 on 4/19/2011, 1:00 pm

I have a ton of reeds outside my house. Ask me in-game anytime and I can teleport you there to collect them.

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